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Post by Julie on Dec 9, 2007 12:57:42 GMT -6
I just posted these two chapters, and I don't want spoilers for them in the other thread, so... if you read them and feel the urge to leave feedback, put your comments in this thread. ;D
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 13:11:47 GMT -6
I'm not even half way thru chap 195 and I'm screaming at my screen "NICK!!!!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!!!!!!!!" "DAMN HE DID IT....." lmao!!!
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 13:43:55 GMT -6
Not quite thru 196 and I'm freakin CRYING!!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU JULIE!!!!!!
LOL
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Post by Julie on Dec 9, 2007 13:55:51 GMT -6
;D That is awful that I'm grinning about making someone cry, but... ya know... I was kinda hoping someone would. It's a compliment to me! Sorry, though. You know how I am...
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Rachel
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Post by Rachel on Dec 9, 2007 14:03:19 GMT -6
ohmygod. sniff. damnit. will be back. need tissues.
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Post by Julie on Dec 9, 2007 14:06:02 GMT -6
I thought about putting a Kleenex warning on 196, but then I didn't. I just wanted it to unfold naturally.
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 14:08:48 GMT -6
Yes, I'm a slow reader...Dew got onto me for that before but I take in every word..sometimes twice.
Ok Julie...give your readers a fuckin heartattack next time why don'tcha!!!!! Geesh!!!!! I was sitting there in a full-fledge bawling session!!! My kids came in to see what the hell was wrong with me!!!!!! Then, I thought to myself "No, she wouldn't DARE!!!". I swear, usually only movies have this kind of effect on me. But I've never cryed THIS much during a damn movie!!!! Back to my first post in the other thread I started...this inflicts so much emotion..I literally felt like I was in the damn hostipal room with them watching it unfold. THAT, my dear, is pure talent.
It's been said many, many times before...great, great chapters Julie *applaudes you*.... I can now see why you were on a writting jag and couldn't stop..what a scene to write.
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Post by Julie on Dec 9, 2007 14:15:27 GMT -6
That's okay, it was a lot to read!! Both of these chapters were long. Altogether, I think it was about 24 pages. Awww... well, I guess your reaction is exactly what I was going for, so thanks!! Hehe, I'm giggling about your kids coming in to check on you though. Haven't I been threatening to kill him for months? Yeah, I finished 195 a week ago... last Sunday night... and spent the rest of the week working on 196, which I only just finished last night. So now you see why I couldn't sleep and didn't want to go to school! It's bad when I'm leaving myself on a freaking cliffhanger! LOL I wanted it to be INTENSE though... I haven't written a scene like that in so long, and I don't know when I will again, so I figured I might as well go all out since it's for the end of BMS LOL. I'm glad you liked it, even though... yeah. Thank you so much.
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 14:25:04 GMT -6
Intense??? Hunny, THAT is the understatment of the fricken year!!!!!!!I'm glad you posted those two chaps together...you think cliffhangers are bad for you!?!?!?!? hahaha
But yeah, you are deff gonna get the reation you wanted from your readers..that "intenseness factor" will get to all of us, I promise!! lol
Ok gonna finally go decorate the tree..I was just about to go do that when you posted these..but I have my priorites straight!! Had to read these first!!! lol
Oh, side note..before I read the last few paragraphs I ran out of ciggys and had to get a new pack..I walked outta my room, wiping tears outta my eyes and my mom was like "you ok?" I just said "yeeeeeeeees...I'm fine, damn Julie"..she just looked at me weird and didn't say anything else..lol
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Post by Julie on Dec 9, 2007 14:34:08 GMT -6
LOL yeah, I couldn't leave you hanging on 195... I was going to, but then I figured they'd be better off read altogether anyway. Didn't wanna break up the momentum LOL. LOL I like your order of priorities. Yay, now your whole family thinks you're insane! JK LOL. I haven't yet been caught by mine bawling in my room over a fanfic, but my mom barges in on me writing every once in awhile. I would love to just go, "Do you have ANY idea what you're interuppting?! You could at least knock!" I'd lock my door, but then she'd probably REALLY wonder what I was doing in here... LOL
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 15:00:28 GMT -6
Awww my Christmas tree looks puuuuuuuudy!!! All it's missing is the icicle tinsle...forgot to get some...
And Julie..this is ME we are talking about..they already KNOW I'm insane!!! I usually lock my door when reading a new chapter but the kids have ruined my door and it won't lock..Justin did barge in on me with these chaps and I just yelled "Get out!! I'll be out in a minute!!" lmao!! But, they also know how I get when you post anything new..they should know better by now!!
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Dec 9, 2007 15:26:03 GMT -6
Haha another reader with her priorites straight!! I just talked to Liane..she was supposed to leave and go somewhere and she was yelling at her family "NO!!! Wait!! Hold on!!" lol She said "That was insane!! I thought she was going to kill him off" lol
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Post by kristy on Dec 9, 2007 15:33:54 GMT -6
I'm balling right now....NOOOOOOOOOO! Oh god.
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Post by kristy on Dec 9, 2007 15:35:43 GMT -6
I was sitting here crying and my mom wanted to know what was wrong...I don't know what to say....I'm just so sad right now. Julie you and your...your...freaking surprises, I think that's the word I'm looking for.
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Post by kristy on Dec 9, 2007 15:40:17 GMT -6
I blame it all on Jamie. Have I ever told anyone how much I hate him?
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