Post by Nina on Sept 12, 2007 8:36:00 GMT -6
Hey guys,
I began writing a story, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback. I have most of the first chapter done, and I usually have a harder time with beginning a story than with the actual story. So I just want to know how the first chapter is coming along, if it's interesting enough that you'd want to read more, that sort of thing.
Here:
www.freewebs.com/noangelnet/untitledCh1.html
I don't have a title yet, and I do have the idea in my head for the story, but it really won't be clear until a little further into the story.
I began writing a story, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback. I have most of the first chapter done, and I usually have a harder time with beginning a story than with the actual story. So I just want to know how the first chapter is coming along, if it's interesting enough that you'd want to read more, that sort of thing.
Here:
www.freewebs.com/noangelnet/untitledCh1.html
I don't have a title yet, and I do have the idea in my head for the story, but it really won't be clear until a little further into the story.
