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Post by juliane on Jan 13, 2007 9:15:49 GMT -6
Oh, that was a fun chapter!
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Post by Julie on Jan 13, 2007 23:01:42 GMT -6
Okay, so as it turns out, that is the end of 166 (which is now posted). I started on 167 last night (technically, this morning at about 2 a.m. LOL), and I finished it tonight! I'll probably post it tomorrow or Monday, but until then, here ya go! www.dreamers-sanctuary.com/bms167sp.htm
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Post by ErinBee on Jan 14, 2007 1:24:00 GMT -6
I LOVE IT!! I think this my favorite chapter in which Claire and Nick aren't together. Now that Nick has Claire's parents approval and Jamie's gone, Nick can move in for the kill. Like a lion hunting a gazelle...
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Post by Rose on Jan 14, 2007 1:48:06 GMT -6
Nick:1 Jamie -2
I can't believe how Jamie blew up, and how everyone raced to take care of Nick. About time Jamie gets karma back at him
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Post by Julie on Jan 14, 2007 2:05:59 GMT -6
Thanks, guys!!! ;D Yeah, unfortunately for Jamie, karma's a bitch.
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Jan 14, 2007 4:13:07 GMT -6
I love it I love it I love it. I just sat here clapping my hands like a fool. Now that we know Claire's parents like Nick better than Jamie maybe she'll get the picture too. I just reeeeeeealy want Nick and Claire together. Laureen is sweet and nice and I know they've slept together and he was her first, but still, after all they have been thru together, the connection they have, Nick and Claire just belong together. God I feel like I'm talking about two friends of mine. This story has grabbed me like no other, ff or otherwise. It really feels like they are old friends of mine.
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Post by jellicle on Jan 14, 2007 4:34:05 GMT -6
I loved the chapter! Again you just left me baffled Julie. What really concerns me here is they way Claire feels. Despite everything Jamie did, it's not easy to put your husband in a situation like that. It's just humiliating. Jamie deserved it, but if i was Claire, i think i would want Nick away from my sight for a while too. Cause no matter how they feel, or what Jamie deserves, Claire and Nick affect each other so much. And it's no longer only the two of them but Laureen is in the picture too. This story gives me too much of mixed feelings. I really wonder how it is going to end.
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Post by estrella on Jan 14, 2007 16:09:48 GMT -6
YES!! I loved it. Claire finally standing up to Jamie... Claire's parents seeing Jamie's true colors... perfect!
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Post by -Veronica- on Jan 14, 2007 16:28:33 GMT -6
Ahhhh I love it. Like estrella said, I'm glad that now her parents are seeing Jamie's true self. I wonder what Laureen is gonna say about Nick's pants down, I would say something.. lol.. Loved the chapter, Julie!
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Post by Julie on Jan 14, 2007 17:51:41 GMT -6
Thanks so much for all the comments!!! I'm glad you liked the last couple of chapters!! This last one was very satisfying to write LOL.
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Post by jellicle on Jan 14, 2007 17:58:42 GMT -6
Yeah i can imagine you writing this chapter with a huge smile on your face and with a evil laugh at the last word. ;D
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Post by Julie on Jan 14, 2007 18:03:07 GMT -6
Yeah i can imagine you writing this chapter with a huge smile on your face and with a evil laugh at the last word. ;D Absolutely! Mwahaha! ;D
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Post by Gravity on Jan 14, 2007 18:06:53 GMT -6
Alright ladies, I'm gonna be in the extreme minority here and say that while I absolutey LOVED chapter 166 (Go Laureen!) and while 167 really made me mad because I loathe Jamie, it also saddened me a bit. Of course my issues with Claire aside, this just brings her one step closer to the obvious and that makes me mad because I like Nick and Laureen together, and I do not feel Claire is worthy of Nick anymore. I can't help it, I can't! I've lost all respect for her, Julie and I had quite the conversation about that last night. But I know how you feel frickfrackgirl, I'm so emotionally involved in this story it's like a drug! LMAO!
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Post by christine on Jan 15, 2007 18:06:53 GMT -6
Hi All....long time no see. I liked the chapter too. It completely rocked! Julie, you're awesome (just in case you didn't already know)
Secondly, I kind of am in between the Nick/Claire getting back together and Nick/Laureen. I know it isn't intentional, but it almost seems as if Claire uses Nick. It seems that whenever she needs something she runs to Nick, yet she's the one who (in my opinion) ran away from Nick when it mattered the most. But I guess that's what love is all about...being there for someone no matter what (as Nick is with Claire)....eh, I don't know.
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Post by Gravity on Jan 15, 2007 18:17:06 GMT -6
Secondly, I kind of am in between the Nick/Claire getting back together and Nick/Laureen. I know it isn't intentional, but it almost seems as if Claire uses Nick. It seems that whenever she needs something she runs to Nick, yet she's the one who (in my opinion) ran away from Nick when it mattered the most. But I guess that's what love is all about...being there for someone no matter what (as Nick is with Claire)....eh, I don't know. Yes!! That's exactly how I feel, exactly! She is a user, even if it's unconsciously. Wow you hit the nail right on the head with me.
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