Rachel
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Post by Rachel on Dec 2, 2006 22:38:22 GMT -6
It's updated. Whoohoo! Goes to read it now. :-D
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Rachel
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Post by Rachel on Dec 2, 2006 22:58:03 GMT -6
OMG, you didn't! *headesk* Will keep my mouth shut because I don't want to spoil it. Next chapter soon, please. EEk.
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Post by Julie on Dec 2, 2006 23:06:00 GMT -6
Tee-hee. I'm evil, I know. But hey, I didn't post it until I knew the next chapter was coming along well. I'm hoping to have it finished tomorrow, maybe even tonight if I get going again.
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ErinBee
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Post by ErinBee on Dec 3, 2006 0:25:57 GMT -6
OMG! That's really all there is to say. Actually, that's never all there is to say for me. If anyone has not read the new chapter ignore the following.
I think Claire is going to end up in the hospital and Jamie will freak again. Nick, of course, will be by her side (LOL) and they will live happily ever after. Well, after they kill Jamie, that is.
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Post by Julie on Dec 3, 2006 0:33:56 GMT -6
Of course! This is the moment when Jamie will freak out, dramatically run out of the hospital, get clipped by the silver Jag on the street, then get completely mowed down by Laureen in her Escalade, on her Sidekick, and lose his leg... then he'll give up on life completely and turn to booze to drown in his sorrows; Claire will leave him because he's a loser; he'll somehow escape suicide, only to be abducted by the freak with the amputee fetish and locked in a basement to be her sex slave for all of time, or until all you guys storm down the door and kill him, thus ridding us of him forever, or until he simply contracts leprosy and rots away, as Jenna suggested.
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ErinBee
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Post by ErinBee on Dec 3, 2006 0:35:53 GMT -6
I KNEW IT!
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ErinBee
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Post by ErinBee on Dec 3, 2006 0:36:14 GMT -6
You can't pull a fast one on us Julie.
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Post by Julie on Dec 3, 2006 0:40:30 GMT -6
Ya got me
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Jenna
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Post by Jenna on Dec 3, 2006 7:45:35 GMT -6
Okay Julie....you gave me a review of my chapters on this forum when I updated Swollen Issues, so here's my review...
Cute beginning with Laureen and Nick on the plane. I could see the smirk when he teases Laureen with the Cosmo and then the teasing suggestion of using the bathroom 'to put the tips to good use.'
Jamie is a jerk. He needs to have his sinuses cleared up via rectally!! It was good that you
1) Allow Claire to get to fly home for Thanksgiving with her parents buying the plane tickets because Jamie is a jackass and wouldn't spend the money on them.
2) Have her go into labor in Florida instead of Des Moines where Jamie would have freaked out and not been there to support poor Claire in anyway.
Now Claire will have Nick around to support her! (do I see a fight coming up between Jamie & Nick??).
I hope chapter 160 gets posted ASAP. You left us hanging with a MAJOR cliffie.
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Post by Julie on Dec 3, 2006 11:13:43 GMT -6
Thanks Jenna!!! - Glad you liked the beginning! - Yes, he is, and good suggestion! 1) Hehe, in the original version, Claire was just like, "Well, if you think we can't afford plane tickets, maybe I'll just call Nick and see if he'd loan us some money. You know he's got enough, and I'm sure he'd love to see me." And Jamie got pissed. But then I remembered that her dad is a freaking dentist and that surely her parents would be both able and happy to fly them down, so I didn't have to have her stoop so low as to bring Nick into it. 2) Hehe Chapter 160 is DONE!! Finished it last night! I wrote like 11 pages yesterday, go me! The bad thing is, the cliffie still isn't exactly resolved! LMAO Whoops.
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Jenna
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Post by Jenna on Dec 3, 2006 11:18:22 GMT -6
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Post by Julie on Dec 3, 2006 11:31:44 GMT -6
Today?
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Post by Nina on Dec 3, 2006 11:46:35 GMT -6
You should DEFINITELY post it ASAP then.... before I start studying for my two finals that I have tomorrow LOL
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Jenna
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Post by Jenna on Dec 3, 2006 11:54:23 GMT -6
yeah what nina said...or at least email them to us, your faithful readers!!!
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Post by Nina on Dec 3, 2006 12:43:32 GMT -6
yeah what nina said...or at least email them to us, your faithful readers!!! Ooooohh I like that idea better!!! You know, let it be a perk of being a faithful reader and fan of your story ;D Or put it up on a thread, we don't mind, we just wanna read it!!!
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