nicksassgrabber
Timid Timekiller
Mr Moppy Knows how to use his Mop!
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Post by nicksassgrabber on Jun 26, 2007 12:26:22 GMT -6
Ok im new to this forum, but ive been following this story for a few months now, and i just wanna say i LOVE this new chapter...there was a part in it that hit sooo close to home i had tears in my eyes and everything! I cant wait to read more!!
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Post by frickfrackgirl on Jun 26, 2007 12:36:41 GMT -6
Ok im new to this forum, but ive been following this story for a few months now, and i just wanna say i LOVE this new chapter...there was a part in it that hit sooo close to home i had tears in my eyes and everything! I cant wait to read more!! LISA!!!!!!!!! Welcome!!!!!!! lol. I'm glad you get to use your sn on here. I loooooove it!!!
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nicksassgrabber
Timid Timekiller
Mr Moppy Knows how to use his Mop!
Posts: 47
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Post by nicksassgrabber on Jun 26, 2007 12:42:21 GMT -6
Ok im new to this forum, but ive been following this story for a few months now, and i just wanna say i LOVE this new chapter...there was a part in it that hit sooo close to home i had tears in my eyes and everything! I cant wait to read more!! LISA!!!!!!!!! Welcome!!!!!!! lol. I'm glad you get to use your sn on here. I loooooove it!!! LOL haha im glad i do too!!!
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Post by kristy on Jun 26, 2007 13:14:48 GMT -6
I love your SN too! haha. Weclome:)
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Post by kristy on Jun 26, 2007 13:20:09 GMT -6
Okay, forum friends, you get a special treat tonight. I just updated 00Carter and was going to update my site at the same time, but it's 4:15 and I have a new hosted story that I said I was gonna post on the next site update, so I'm going to make that tomorrow (*cough*latertoday*cough*) instead of now. BUT... I did manage to finish my epic BMS chapter tonight, despite Amy's attempts to distract me ( ), so I'm posting that, in its un-proofread form, for you guys tonight. Enjoy!! www.dreamers-sanctuary.com/bms179sp.htmlIt's like 14 pages long, but there was just no good place to break it up, and I'm concerned about staying UNDER 200 chapters, so I'm trying not to break em up too much. I apologize for the seemingly random series of events in this chapter though. I basically knew how I wanted it to begin and how I wanted it to end... everything in between was totally me writing by the seat of my pants LOL. Oh, and I'm going to put a huge sap warning on the ending - have a napkin handy, cause you might get sticky with all its sugary sweetness. I debated over that part, but in the end, I AM a huge sap, so nyah. OMG Julie! I LOVE it, and I LOVE YOU! Thank you!
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 13:27:55 GMT -6
OMG what a chapter!!! LOVED IT!!!!!! You sooooooo freakin rock. Thanks for posting it. I'm now reeeeeeealy late for work but it was totally worth it. Your killing me here!! lol. Really I did love it and sit on pins and needles for the next chap. Thanks Julie!!! Sorry I made you late for work, but thanks Jen!!! ;D LOL I'm really glad you liked it!!
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 13:30:44 GMT -6
Wow, what a chapter!!!! I loved it!!!!! The tension between Nick and Claire, oh my god!! It was incredible! Nick should have kissed her then, and it would be some drama!! ;D Heheheh. About Kevin's leaving, when i was reading i felt like it happened just like that in real life. Great great chapter Julie!!! Thanks, Gozde!!! LOL You KNOW I was SO tempted to have them kiss at the end there... I wanted to... but I made myself resist the temptation. There's enough drama already without them being unfaithful. And thanks for the feedback on Kevin's leaving - I have to admit, that part came up kinda randomly. I knew I wanted a Bsb part, but I had no idea what to actually write besides some summary stuff, so... I wrote that LOL. Figured it would be realistic, seeing as how it's three years later in the story than it is now in real life. But I hadn't had time to plan and give any thought to how it would actually play out; I just wrote it. So I'm glad you thought it turned out okay.
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 13:31:30 GMT -6
Ok im new to this forum, but ive been following this story for a few months now, and i just wanna say i LOVE this new chapter...there was a part in it that hit sooo close to home i had tears in my eyes and everything! I cant wait to read more!! Awww, thank you!!! Sorry I made you cry, but that is such a huge compliment to me, so thank you. I'm glad you liked the chapter!
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 13:32:00 GMT -6
OMG Julie! I LOVE it, and I LOVE YOU! Thank you! Thank YOU!! ;D
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Post by kristy on Jun 26, 2007 13:32:31 GMT -6
Nick scoffed exaggeratedly. “Maybe in your prime – like when you actually had hair – but not anymore.”
I laughed so hard at that!
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Post by kristy on Jun 26, 2007 13:36:37 GMT -6
Another thing that I love about your stories, Julie, is that they have hidden, so to speak, advice. Not just for the characters in the stories, but for someone reading it as well. Such as the part where Nick and AJ are talking about Nick and his relationships. Such good advice in there.
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nicksassgrabber
Timid Timekiller
Mr Moppy Knows how to use his Mop!
Posts: 47
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Post by nicksassgrabber on Jun 26, 2007 13:50:00 GMT -6
Ok im new to this forum, but ive been following this story for a few months now, and i just wanna say i LOVE this new chapter...there was a part in it that hit sooo close to home i had tears in my eyes and everything! I cant wait to read more!! Awww, thank you!!! Sorry I made you cry, but that is such a huge compliment to me, so thank you. I'm glad you liked the chapter! Hey its ok LOL...its just another reason why i love this story!
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Post by jellicle on Jun 26, 2007 14:30:53 GMT -6
Wow, what a chapter!!!! I loved it!!!!! The tension between Nick and Claire, oh my god!! It was incredible! Nick should have kissed her then, and it would be some drama!! ;D Heheheh. About Kevin's leaving, when i was reading i felt like it happened just like that in real life. Great great chapter Julie!!! Thanks, Gozde!!! LOL You KNOW I was SO tempted to have them kiss at the end there... I wanted to... but I made myself resist the temptation. There's enough drama already without them being unfaithful. And thanks for the feedback on Kevin's leaving - I have to admit, that part came up kinda randomly. I knew I wanted a Bsb part, but I had no idea what to actually write besides some summary stuff, so... I wrote that LOL. Figured it would be realistic, seeing as how it's three years later in the story than it is now in real life. But I hadn't had time to plan and give any thought to how it would actually play out; I just wrote it. So I'm glad you thought it turned out okay. Your welcome! I could feel how close it was to reality, Nick's outburst to Kevin, and Kevin's logical reasoning behind his quit. I loved it! Oh and of course your temptation!! It's so hard to stop yourself from letting them kiss!! When Nick's feelings are so in the middle, that would be just more mind confusing. Though I have to admit, secretly somewhere inside, I want Claire to suddenly kiss him. Like just a huge smooch on the lips, out of nowhere -driven by hormones! Heheheh. But that would be too over the edge for someone as self controlled as Claire. ;D
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 15:15:55 GMT -6
Nick scoffed exaggeratedly. “Maybe in your prime – like when you actually had hair – but not anymore.” I laughed so hard at that! Hehe, thanks. ;D
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Post by Julie on Jun 26, 2007 15:17:17 GMT -6
Another thing that I love about your stories, Julie, is that they have hidden, so to speak, advice. Not just for the characters in the stories, but for someone reading it as well. Such as the part where Nick and AJ are talking about Nick and his relationships. Such good advice in there. Thanks!! LOL That sounds so funny, cause in all honestly, I'm probably the last person you'd want to go to for relationship advice! I haven't had enough relationships to know from my own experience LOL.
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