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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:09:42 GMT -6
I don't know why, but Brian reminds me of Matt Damon in The Departed in this story a lot. LOL
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:13:35 GMT -6
And no offense to anyone, but I love that Brian has a gf in the story and it's not Leighanne. LOL
Does the tail make my ass look big! LMAO! That is hilarious!
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Post by Julie on Aug 11, 2008 20:14:26 GMT -6
Thanks for all the feedback, Kris! ;D I love how you comment as you read too! LOL
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:15:34 GMT -6
LOL I get everything in like that! It's too long to remember everything you want to say.
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:16:12 GMT -6
"Don't Cha" OMG! That song...WOW! Good idea though, fits perfectly! OMG at their names! Cookie, Cocoa, Muffin and Candy. LOVE IT!
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:26:49 GMT -6
The next ten minutes were among the most uncomfortable she’d ever experienced, and not just because she was lying on stone cold ceramic. She tried to block out the sounds of Hef’s grunting and straining as he rifled through what she assumed to be a magazine, hearing the pages crinkle against his dusty old fingers
LAMO! EWWW! That's disgusting.
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Post by Rose on Aug 11, 2008 20:29:12 GMT -6
We love your feedback! I love watching you keep pausing to comment in the thread as you read
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:32:54 GMT -6
It's fun!
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:35:46 GMT -6
EWWW! Em NO! Ya'll oughta be hit for that! That is so nasty!
"-oooSHIIIIIIIIIT! Shit! Shitty shitballs LAMO!
That's what he gets! Carter just can't leave stuff alone, especially things of that nature.
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Post by Julie on Aug 11, 2008 20:46:08 GMT -6
LMFAO and guess who got stuck writing that part?! Kelly was supposed to write it, but her computer got stolen, and she lost of most of what she had of it, so... Julie to the rescue! LMAO
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:49:17 GMT -6
I would love to see Nick in a bra for real! LMAO!!!!
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:50:00 GMT -6
LMFAO and guess who got stuck writing that part?! Kelly was supposed to write it, but her computer got stolen, and she lost of most of what she had of it, so... Julie to the rescue! LMAO I love it! That is freaking hilarious! Then Fucky fuck, fuck a duck?! LMAO
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Post by Julie on Aug 11, 2008 20:51:54 GMT -6
Noo, not that part (that was Rose), the Emerald/Hef part LOL.
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Post by kristy on Aug 11, 2008 20:55:57 GMT -6
EWWW at that baby...now to find out what it is...
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Post by Julie on Aug 11, 2008 21:13:57 GMT -6
Yeah, please let us know if this all makes sense once you're done reading. This whole idea was rather complicated; we were still patching up plot holes right up until when we posted it last night LOL.
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