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Post by A-RokzStalker on Jul 22, 2007 0:02:21 GMT -6
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Post by Julie on Jul 22, 2007 0:34:05 GMT -6
Oooh, very interesting start! Short, but it's already put questions in my head. Great way to start a story!! On a side note, I find it interesting that you always seem to write in present tense. I don't see that a lot!
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Jul 22, 2007 0:35:59 GMT -6
LOL! YAY!!! Oh wow! You don't know how excited that makes me that YOU like it! lol.
I don't know what it is about me and present tense. I always try writing in past tense, but it never turns out very well. I guess present tense is what I'm meant to write, lol.
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Post by Julie on Jul 22, 2007 0:39:05 GMT -6
Yep, that must just be your writing style. Makes it unique. ;D
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Jul 22, 2007 0:42:48 GMT -6
Yep! I guess so! lol.
When I try writing past tense, everything comes out like, "No, I don't think so," he said.
There's just way too much he said/she said and it makes my writing really choppy.
Also, I noticed that I tend to write in 1 person POV. I think that's probably because it allows more opinion and whatnot, lol.
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Jul 22, 2007 17:35:55 GMT -6
Okay, I added a little bit more to it!
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Shauna
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Post by Shauna on Aug 1, 2007 22:39:21 GMT -6
Just found the story today Amy and read it. It's a great start and it's got me wanting to read more, I hope you post more soon.
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Aug 1, 2007 22:54:24 GMT -6
Oh thank you!!!
LOL! If you wanna read more, then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE get on my case about it! Seriously, ask Kristy! I don't write stories, I write scenes! lol. I think I need someone to remind me constantly, you know? Because I'll sit there and stare at it every once in awhile and get nothing that I think is good, maybe someone reminding me would help. *shrugs*
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Post by favi on Sept 24, 2007 18:59:13 GMT -6
AMY WRITE MORE OF YOUR STORY!
I NEED DETAILS! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!
hehe!
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Sept 24, 2007 19:27:59 GMT -6
Oh dear... I'd forgotten all about this! lol. I'll have to see what I have... I'll work on it soon.
so, you like it?
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Post by favi on Sept 24, 2007 19:31:26 GMT -6
YES!! But I don't know the minor details.
Like WHO is talking! lol
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Sept 24, 2007 19:33:40 GMT -6
*gasps and cracks up* Sorry, I believe that comes in the next part. Though, I could've sworn I mentioned something obvious in the part that's already up... hmm... maybe that's the part I deleted. Anywho, you'll learn the details in time. That's actually what the whole story is, is figuring out what happened ;D. You'll hate me for it, lol.
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Post by favi on Sept 24, 2007 19:37:21 GMT -6
ARGH! Sounds good so far. I love it when it all comes together at the end and you have to think about it throughout the story!
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Post by A-RokzStalker on Sept 24, 2007 19:39:36 GMT -6
Oh, well then you'll just love this one! lol. Muahahaha! It's confusing though. Seriously, I even get confused when I'm writing it! I'm like, so this was this then, and now that's this, because this used to be that, and- What the heck was that?!
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Post by favi on Sept 24, 2007 19:42:50 GMT -6
You're evil! HAHA! that's funny!
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